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Once More

The stars seemed to fall upon each other,
The end was eminent.
He held her close, tears glistening,
A torrent of red and yellow filled the sky.
He held her close, one more kiss.
As the end came and they were no more.

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Distancerunner19

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  • takemypainaway
    March 11, 2008

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    nice poem

    but feel that their could be more strength

    but nice overall

    thank you for entering!!

    **kat