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As She Danced

Strobes lighting stage,

rhythm thunder syllables,

as fragments strum harps,

orchestrating ravaging grace.


Dancing intoxication's stagger,

fingers grasp lunar persuasion,

then she dips below clouds,

toes twirling on Earth's creations.

 

 

 


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  • broken bloody angel
    March 5, 2008
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    sweet!

    i thought it was really good, and the picture helped a lot for me. congrats.

    -Bella


  • Roaddog Wolf
    March 4, 2008

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    very good write I liked this allot
    "Dancing intoxication's stagger,

    fingers grasp lunar persuasion," very nicely penned

    Thanks for the entry and good luck in the contest


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 4, 2008

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    uhhhh love this like the lines then the description or ummm well you know rhythm thunder ((syllables,))
    these lol Good luck in the contest