hovering above verdant pastures
wrapped in steel grey billows
pure light encased within my gaze
I see the world with clarity
to look upon nature's wonders
I am in awe
Author notes
30 words exactly
A contest entry
- 30 WORD QUIKIE -NATURE PICTURE PROMPT INSPIRED - CLOSES AFTER 10 ENTRIES-CHECK IT OUT by Roaddog Wolf.
550 points, ended March 4, 2008, 8 entries
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That is 30 words and every single one of them fits.
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Nicely penned write
"wrapped in steel grey billows" like that imagery well done,
Grey is Gray
Thanks for the entry and good luck in the contest
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Beautiful, best of luck in the contest.
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awwww mummy this is beautiful. you always write so beautiuflly with thought and imager behind each word. it always amazes me.well done mummy i love you so much
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This is beautiful Great take on the prompt Good luck
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