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Broken Pieces

Don't step
on the broken pieces
of my heart

Glass
on a wooden floor
Slicing

Don't make me stumble
on the memories
for the broken pieces
of my heart
hurt me

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I wrote this in about 5 seconds

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  • liduen silver member
    March 5, 2008
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    well...pretty good for 5 seconds Good luck in the contest


  • Rachel21
    March 4, 2008
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    aww sad good luck


  • DeadlyTurnip
    March 4, 2008

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    Yea, not your best. I'm only saying that because I know you can write amazingly well