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the Point

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Rumbling booms rip the sky

shuddering earth and air

with swirls

from God's finger.

 

Pointing through wind's

leaden tail

at His creation.

 

Reminding all

in thunderous display

of his artistry.

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  • Lady Australis silver member
    March 5, 2008
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    congrats on silver grandfather
    wonderful


  • Roaddog Wolf
    March 4, 2008

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    Good write great flow and imagery
    "Rumbling booms rip the sky

    shuddering earth and air

    with swirls" I like that

    thanks for entering and good luck in the contesst


  • Tender Expressions
    March 4, 2008

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    Your words somehow always carry an impact to the reader that is undeniable.
    I can see clearly why so many adore your work.
    Well Done!
    Keep up the great work!

    ♥
    ~TE~


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 4, 2008

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    Excellent work Dear good luck with this in the contest.