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Nights of an Unrealized Dream

I hear your voice.
Your voice.
Your what I always wanted...
What I always dreamt of.
You have become the reality of it all,
But in turn you have become my nightmare.
With the pain you inflict upon me,
To the bright scars that you leave behind.
I am here waiting for you.
I wait.
I feel you against me,
I feel the sharp metal slide...
I feel the inevitable pain on both the inside,
And the outside of my being.
I want you.
I want your feeling.
You are what has become me and,
In turn I have become you.
I have become my own nightmare.

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  • redhanded
    May 6, 2008

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    hmm ...

    very nice write and very sad as well full of intense and raw emotion 2...best of luck in the future and im my contest and thnxxx for entering...
    andi
    (redhanded)

  • ravenleah
    May 6, 2008
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    entry for #21