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Black, White, and Shades of Gray

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‘Tis narry a hair on a piglet’s tail
that will get a horse a’rearin’
a bull a’stompin’
a cock a’crowin’
in the twilight gale…

for it doesn’t take much
to push us along
t’do what comes a’natural
like playin’ with blocks
in a reflection’s gleam
like swimmin’ out
to the midst of a stream
like looking at life
in black and white
when shades of gray surround us.



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Picture "Black And White" @ deviantart by oelje

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  • Ryno
    March 4, 2008

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    This piece is filled with beautiful usage of langauge and stunning, moving wisdom.

    Really a gentle, soothing write, without being demanding you get your message across powerful.

    We need too look around as...there is so much more.

    Very beautiful, loved every minute of it.

    Thanks for the entry


    • wbiro gold member
      March 4, 2008
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      thanks, I went for the unexpected this time...