Shadows of yesterday
haunt me to this day
Out stretched hands
can't seem to reach you
Roses carefully placed on your grave
to let you know i remember you still
Rain soaks my face
mixing with my tears
On my knees
I scream out your name
Waiting on a reply
that never comes
Author notes
Firequeen
for the daily inspirations group.
Picture from
http://hekamiah.deviantart.com/art/Sorrow-19891688
A contest entry
- Round #1 (enter away) by takemypainaway.
390 points, ended March 22, 2008, 52 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this is a lovely accrostic
i love the emotion
it is simple and to that part i love it
thank you for entering!!
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Beautiful!!
This really moved me
and wow can I relate!
Great work!
~Pastel
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I am a huge fan of acrostics, and I love them a lot. I also do a few myself.
First half paints the image, last you ended it with great emotion and feelings. I could feel the angst and pain.
You did a wonderful job with this one. One of my favorites I think.
Kari
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What a strong image you have penned in this well done acrostic. I'm impressed; well done!
Love,
Amera♥
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Wow amera thank you so very much for your very kind words
They mean alot to me.
So glad you liked my twist on the acrostic
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Great
That is great. Its so real. so raw.
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Thank you very much
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wow
This is absolutly fantastic!
by far the best kind of acrostic ive seen!
your words are'nt forced and the depth doesnt feel boxed the way some acrostics feel.
this is ripe with emotion and just so beautifully done.
hunny, you should be extremly proud of yourself!
Firequeens on a roll !!!
i love you
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Thank you hunny
I really like the way this one turned out
the picture really inspired me.
I am so glad you like this baby
I love you
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