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Stolen Moments

Missing image




bejewelled visions scatter
as midnight tolls a warning
silently she steals away for
she must be home by morning


but what a night it was


waltzing in her lover's arms
feet barely touched the floor
twirling her around the room
ever closer to the terrace door


a smile, a glance, then  slipping away
playful touches on her waist
she knew that he was only teasing
yet his love she had to taste


just one more time


fervant looks exchanged twixt two
knowing eyes spoke volumes
needs to be fulfilled, a must
as they felt passion bloom


beneath the stars, he held her
whispering her name with desire
tender kisses blazed a trail
as fingertips sparked aching fire


forbidden love often the sweetest


lifting skirts and petticoats
strong hands drew her closer to him
their union a need that drove him on
she would always be his sweetest whim


tender moments in the moonlight
stolen kisses tinged with regret
this would be their last goodbye
a night they would never forget

 

 

 

Author notes

Prompt:- "And when I see you, I will remember what we had, and cherish what we lost."

I saw the picture and felt like telling a story, so here it is...



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  • vena sera
    March 10, 2008
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    beautiful! capturing


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    March 9, 2008

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    "beneath the stars, he held her
    whispering her name with desire
    tender kisses blazed a trail
    as fingertips sparked aching fire"


    Don't know how I missed this, sheesh! but I'm glad I came back to enjoy, because it was so romantic and sensual Margaret, you really did well with this dear, and congrats on the silver as well.


    Love and peace,
    mj.


    • Margaret Denham gold member
      March 9, 2008
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      Thank you, Michael. When I saw the picture I fell in love with it and really wanted to tell a story around it. I'm happy that you liked it.




  • Rachel21
    March 7, 2008
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    holy crap, this is really good


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 4, 2008

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    wow mummy i was so intriguied and caught up in your words. You captured so much in this it was truly amaxing.the love and images well done mummy


    • Margaret Denham gold member
      March 4, 2008
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      Thank you babygirl The picture was so lovely and it made me want to tell a story.

      Love you lots
      Mummy

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