“And
a brain
attached to the lines
of a worldly city
has enough ingenious alone
to ignite all
their broken homes.”
the insane poet
wrote.
Author notes
"kowledge is power." ~Proverb
poem by Ryno
A contest entry
- 3 of 13 Challenges [Invite Only]. by Naridill.
650 points, ended March 5, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Celticmoon's and Leander's glue a trophy on my Prewrite by leander.
800 points, ended March 27, 2008, 74 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Shoot.
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Now this is an interesting piece. It really gives the mind something to toil. And I like the quote of self rolling here, nice job.
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You have entered something that provides quite some 'food' to think about actually, and I like these kind of thought-provoking poetry.
Short and abstract - but I definately like that
Thanks for the entry!
Leander -
I have always admire your the abstract quality of your society pieces. It si never so much so that they are too difficult to understand but rather enough to be a slap to the reader.
Thank you for entering.
Best of luck to you!
Blessings
Bel
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Oh, damn ME and MY amazingness.
This was wow!
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This wouldn't match up to yours in 10000000000000 x 100000000000000000 years
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LIES!
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*shoots*
Love this - very well scribed with touches of insanity as well. Nicely done - thanks for entering,
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ooohooohooh, I like this. It's a poem, with a proverb in it. Intresting.
Again, I think this is awesome.
~Cassie
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~twisted~
arent I? -
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Urm, just a little bit. I have my ~~~~~~twisted~~~~~~ moments, too.
When my muse likes me, anyways.
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Intriguing
Now this is a very powerful complexing poem here and I really love how powerful you made this. I love the straightforwardness of this bluntly stated poem and also how you took it into contrast that it was from an insane poet. any ways a wickedly evil but masterfully penned poem. keep up the very good work lil bro n good luck
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