Once whole I stood proud
Now wrecked pieces I gather
Of Innocence you ripped apart
Leaving me bare for your ecstasy
…I now quiver with shame, covering my bleeding heart
Author notes
Here's what I see behind the picture happening.
In a list
A contest entry
- . by Aurora Ceres.
475 points, ended March 8, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Deep powerful writing. Full of emotion this one. Wonderful writing here. Keep it up.
Love
Wayne Leon
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This sounds similiar to the other poem you dd with this picture. Good luck o you in the contest and with all your future writing endeavors.
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WONDERFUL
It is so sad when someone uses another to satisfy themselves without regard as to how the other feels. I could never use another in any way as having been used in certain ways myself has brought me much sorrow and I could never bring such sorrow to another.
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wow!
strong write sweetie
i think you did a great job with this
hope all is well with you
much love,
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This is fantastic! Sad and soooooooo much emotion!! You sure said a lot with sooo few lines!! Great job!!
Best of luck in this contest!!
Nyetta
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aawww sad but written very well good luck with it in the contest
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awww now see another wonderful right, and 5lines. it's amazing, and filled with emotions, sooosad. sigh much better than mine, good luck in the contest. and wonderful write.
take care
stephanie =)
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i can see how u saw tht.. great poem
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