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pass the sea,
to the ocean,
over the mountains,
through the grass,
until you hit our ass,
fall on your face,
and see the grace,
Cause I am the one who will help you up

can someone help me

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  • Lost Emo
    March 4, 2008

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    nice write liked the rhyming towards the end. The fact that u will be willing 2 pick the person up who falls is a gd show of ur character.


  • Kelli Marie
    March 4, 2008

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    This is both nice and a bit witty. Very well written. I enjoyed the read as well. Nicely done. Good work.
    Kelli