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My little evil heart

my heart use to care,
but not anymore,
its careless,
wants to hurt,
and laugh about,
it had so much pain,
now they can see,
my mouth say words to make you cry,
my heart isn't sweet anymore,
its careless,
and you will see what I mean when you cross my path,
of what I mean,
my heart only cares for,
David,
Blackheart16,
Justin
Tina
and no one else,
SO be prepare for some hurt

can someone help me

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  • Lost Emo
    March 4, 2008

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    wow this was very strong. ur heart ain't evil because ur an awesome person and if other ppl can't see that then its their loss as they want get 2 talk 2 such a wonderful person.


  • Kelli Marie
    March 4, 2008

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    This sounds very personal. Has a strong bite to it. A typo or two, but other than that, a well written piece.
    Kelli