Gathering destroyed pieces
Broken, shattered
Bits of innocence left in dirt
Reflects back with disgust
Once a purest pearl
Now is a black diamond
With sharp razors
Cutting, leaving me to bleed
The trust I had
Is now tainted
Love I cherished
Has left me deserted
I stand here bare
Numb, no air to breathe
Tears have left me
Alone with nothingness
Ripping my soul
Peeling my dignity
Respect you took away
Leaving me mocking at my own reflection
Ashamed I close my eyes
Cuddling myself to cover
My bruised bare skin
As my heart silently bleeds
Unaided in the midst of time
Waiting for my decay
You slowly burn me to floating ashes
For a painful demise
To satisfy your demonic desires
Innocence ripped apart
As you peeled layers of my soul
Leaving me exposed to your pleasure
Mourning to your heart’s desire
Until you decided I was time to leave
The broken pieces behind
..may be for another round of game
For your demonic pleasure
…may be some other time
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The image is a reflection I dared to peek into yet it screamed at me that I couldn't ignore.
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Minoo,
WOW!!!!!!! Hon, what a wonderful read!! This is amazing!! I really enjoyed this one, and you know you captured it quite well!! Fantastic!!
and love
Nyetta
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awwwwww this is beautiful and so emotional, great write, i enjoyed reading this alot.
but this has way more than 5lines, so you might want to chnage it for the comp.
but greatw rite
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Thanks Stephanie
Thanks sweetie
- oops! generally the rules at the bottom of the picture and so I missed it... let me try writing another one 
... I appreciate though your comment... I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.. and again thanks for your help ... take care Minoo
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lol. yeah i know. yay ill read ur new one when your done =)
welcies.
you too
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you are an angel... thanks again to you for letting me know before I got DQ... I've uploaded another try ... take care sweetie.
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aww thanks *hugs*
yay! ill go read it then =)
you take care too =)
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Awww, so much pain and hurt comes through in this piece. Old wounds heal hard. You never really feel whole again.
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Thanks hun
I know exactly what you mean - you never feel whole again, specially with some experiences
...but still I like to see the beautiful side of life which is also in plenty - in fact one life time is short time to enjoy all its beauty ... yet sometime past comes from behind peeking, catching us of guard but only for a little bit for its left far behind where it belongs ... Thanks for seeing the pain & hurt behind the words... appreciate your support and comment... take care Minoo
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