Adrift in this world eternal
Sought out not by you or I
These things remain forever
No reason or evidence as to why
Words fall on deaf ears
Actions soon forgotten.
What is… is,
And nothing one can do or say
Will change that,
For we are only one solid being
In this universe that holds millions
We are irrelevant
Insignificant
To what is
And always will be.
Author notes
Based on the quote;
Truth in Words
What is ... is,
and nothing one
can do or say
will change that.
By Riftkin
15 lines I've penned for you.
In a list
A contest entry
- Quote Prompt by Riftkin.
525 points, ended March 18, 12 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow
Wow its really good. Readng this I would never think you were an amature poet. I should really start looking to see if I can find your name in any books I read.
Now I disagree with you though that nothing in life has really been decided. People rise out from nothing to become leaders. People who believe the would can be changed are the ones that change the world and the only people who are insignificant are the ones who do nothing.

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Love your take on this prompt. Thank you for entering. Riftkin

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Gulp...I feel sooooo small...lol...great write ...good luck.


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Thanks!!
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how very true is this... seriously... it's the way that life is.


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