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Virtual Paper

virtual paper
thoughts that taper
dreams can come and go
life can be a bed of roses
your senses will tell you so
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  • kareneisenlord gold member
    November 12, 2008

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    I like short sometimes

    And in this case I like it. Yes, "life can be a bed of roses" in virtual reality. Very good point and expression here. The computer is certainly saving a lot of trees from becoming paper!