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That face,that "piece of heaven" face
And your body that's moving with grace
AFter I've seen them all i know my place
It's behind you ,In your heart's space

The love will tryumph in our place
And the trust's power it's our ace
We will rove those unknown locations
We will fallow feelings to our destinations

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  • Ellis gold member
    September 16, 2008
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    Excellent

    Outstanding. This is great in meaning and in poetic quality. I LOVE THIS POEM. --Ellis


  • Dont Lose THE ONE
    March 8, 2008

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    Omg. This is so cute. I love this poem it's just amazing. I love the way you described her face as a "piece of heaven" that was beautiful! Great Job! The last 2 lines again are amazing great write!


  • tilldeathdowepart
    March 8, 2008
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    great

    its awesome, i loved it keep going