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Love Floats

Not a day goes by,

that I don't think about you

 

just the mention of your name

drives me mad

 

And leaves me longing for the spring,

when the lonely whipperwind

will bring you back to me.

 

Forever into my arms,

reunited at last, and for always

 

Because baby I'm lost forever

without you...

 

Without you

My heart is as tangled as the vines

on a laurel thicket

 

My mind stays in a state

of chaotic grace

 

I'm as lost as a fading season

descending under a crescent moon

 

A chill on the evening breeze

always wearing a vale of tears

 

In snowmelt streams

forever the keeper of your heart

 

Without you I'm alone,

and as cold as a November cemetary

 

Always searching for your face in the clouds

always listening to the wind for the whisper of my name

 

waiting...

 

always waiting

 

For the warm sweet breath of May 

 

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  • chilali
    September 25, 2008

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    Wow!

    "I'm as lost as a fading season
    descending under a crescent moon

    A chill on the evening breeze
    always wearing a vale of tears

    In snow melt streams
    forever the keeper of your heart"

    ^^ Those were my favorite lines. This entire poem was beautiful. And I can relate to it very much. I sure do know how it feels to keep waiting and waiting for that one special person. Very romantic and touching. Full of well portrayed emotions.


  • delightfulmess silver member
    September 19, 2008

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    Awe... this is soooooooooooooooooooooo beautiful!!
    filled with such elegant romance.

    I loved this
    thank you for entering my contest.



    Delila


  • Angelflower
    March 28, 2008

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    This was so nice.. So full of longing and hope..
    I really enjoyed reading this.. This was full of emotion..
    Thank you so much for this piece.
    It was sad in the longing but sweet..
    Great write.. Jetleena


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    March 28, 2008

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    Truly lovely!

    I would buy this poem with the frame and background,
    absolutely beautiful. We hang in proudly in my home!
    Sure wish we had the ability here on this site.
    Truly lovely poem, thankyou kindly for your entry!
    ears/Seattle.


  • Angels Whispers gold member
    March 22, 2008
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    Congrats

    Hey girl
    congrats on the silver,well deserved indeed.Keep up the great writes.
    Blessings to you,
    ~Angel~


  • Melissa Burns
    March 21, 2008

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    la la la love it! Thank you for entering it into my evver so humble little contest


  • BeautifulFlame
    March 18, 2008

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    Excellent!

    This was very beautiful and great for the prompt!
    thanks for entering,

    hugs
    ~Lisa~


    • Dusty Rose
      March 18, 2008
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      Thank you so very much for the nice comment and for silver

      Dusty

  • Angels Whispers gold member
    March 14, 2008

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    BEAUTIFUL

    Hi Dusty
    I have just finished reading your entry and wish to let you know just how much I have enjoyed the read.If we searched writer, poets and philosophers could we
    find a better phrase to describe what we feel in every cell of our body when we are in love? I submit we would not. What a perfect poem and a delight to experience.You have provided within your written words a simple warm feeling that makes the soul smile.You used gentle words,sensitive and loving.I really love this piece, it is so innocently written, so sweet and just a really nice image seen within the written words, and the way you worded your poem, makes the reader want to keep on reading on and on.. great job here Dusty,keep up the great work as you have a beautiful voice.I wish you all the best in this contest.
    Take care and many blessings to you .

    ~Angel~


    • Dusty Rose
      March 15, 2008
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      Thank you So very very much for the wonderful comment.

      Dusty


  • JohnnyD gold member
    March 4, 2008

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    Absolutly lovely, ,marvelously well done with passion, compassion, love and longing. I am seriously jealous!



    len

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