You hold in your hand
The key to unlock my heart
It was opened once before
Only to be torn all apart
Take that key
Stick it into the lock
But be prepared for the tears
That have long been forgot...
You can unlock me
But be prepared for more
You have no idea what's been hidden
Behind my hearts door
It's been closed up so long
I'm afraid it shall remain that way forever
Until you came along claiming
We were destined to be together
So now I stand before you
You are holding up the key
The only one of it's kind
The only thing that will get you inside of me...
By: SLD 11/15/03
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Written November 15th, 2003
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Liked the idea of you holding the key to his heart!This is cleverlywritten and feel that you have been hurt in the past!You have put a lot of emotion into this poem and expressed your feelings very well.Wish you luck and hope the key is well oiled!
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GREAT
wow..your so freakin deep..so much emotion is packed into all your poems and its AWESOME!! i love reading your stuff girl!!.. -
Great write Sweetie! Definitely relate... you have a simple, genuine flow to your poems (hah, flow is my favorite quality)... great job! Thank you for reading me so much you are SUCH a sweetheart!
Trin -
Touching and honest
Excellent poem Sonya. I know what you mean by:It was opened once before, Only to be torn apart. I loved these two lines, they are so true. Take care Sonya. . . . . -
this really great and i have to come up with a lot to say so i can get the contest thing, this si lie the second ime i have read this, and thsi great each time wow. this is hard to try and think of some thing to say about some thing you have already read but these are the words so its a comment lol. ok i think there is enought lines on here for me to be done. great job again sweety,
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WOW
wow, i read that twice and still don't feel as if i got the full meaning. YOu are a great writer. -
Awww this is so nice, I like it a lot, I needed to read something like this right about now. Its been an interesting day...with my ex friend semi harassing me through poem comments and such. This was so nice, I loved it, abolsutely loved the way it flowed and rhymed and how you wrote it. Thanks for sharing!
~*~blessings~*~
~rora -
This brought tears to my eyes. I can relate so very much. And I wish you the BEST in everything you set your heart to. You are one of a kind, and I give you all the credit in the world for that. Much love.
*~*KaTeLyNn*~*
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Nice Write!
I think at one time or another we all have held the key to someone's heart. It gives you a sence of power but with it comes responsiblity. You want to cheresh that heart, not missuse it. Very nicely writen! Love and hugs, Belinda
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i love this
this is such a beautifully written poem, my favorite stanzas are:
You can unlock me
But be prepared for more
You have no idea what's been hidden
Behind my hearts door
It's been closed up so long
I'm afraid it shall remain that way forever
Until you came along claiming
We were destined to be together
i thank you so much for writing and posting this poem hun. and i also want to thank you for your comment on my poem, burners love free, i thank you so much for your kind words hun, but im sure that i dont have half the talent of yours. but i thank you again hun. ~Julzzz~
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aww pretty poem! its great when you can find someone that you can really open up to, someone to trust
thank you so much for your comment it was sooo sweet, love your writting, your one of my favourite poets on here, keep writtin 
neways fantastic write again
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great job i really like the first stanza. great job again
~Dirk~ -
Very very good... Dang chick, that was a great piece. I like that a lot! Good job!! It was great. You never cease to amaze me yet again... The final stanza... very good. I loved that very much. Keep on writing great work like this!!
Sarah -
Great
Very strong and clear, and great to read ^_^ Your rhymes are good to, I especially enjoyed the first and final stanzas. The imagery you provide is great, also. The general theme of it is also very clever ^_^ Overall, great job!
SiN -
Wow girl...this was a great piece...Everything was so clear, and you kept the reader right on...u know as well as I do, Randy can take your past, and help you forget it...bc u know he's ur future...and future is all that matters at this point in time...past has been long forgotten, and if u still think about it...don't worry I do too...But Randy and Jarrod know our past, and know that whatever happens, they'll be with us...u and randy are strong...remember that...
Love and miss ya gurl
~*Jemmy -
Intense piece. I loved reading it, the emotions were very clear and descriptive. That and this was a poem I can relate to, I suppose we all can one way or another. You expressed yourself well here. Wonderfully written.
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