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My Angel

Now tell me, what would you do
if these shackles bound your wrists
to thick chains attached to a
cracked stone wall?
Could you free yourself from corruption?
Take note of me.
Push out your inner demon,
the one who slithers just beneath the surface,
who cackles evils into your ear,
the one who tells you there is no God.
No God.
Slip through this cage,
defy,
move at your own aching pace,
there are no more boundaries here.
It’s your capture, your escape.
Pry these bars open with your bear hands,
relish in the tearing flesh and flowing blood
…and smile.
Torment societies sins upon themselves,
burn them for their crimes,
let them live,
allow them to pay only in suffering.
Make them breath in the ashes of the dead,
of their deceit.
May their eyes hold only fear;
to see only the anguish they themselves brought forth.
Together we shall give them the life
that they have given us.
We shall introduce them to the devil,
we shall introduce them to you,
my angel.

Author notes

Shadow.

Difinitly not my best write, but still a write all the same. Perhaps i will be struck by a few good ideas here in the next little while.

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  • The Cave
    March 7, 2008
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    good, I like the structure...It makes me think it is the voice whispering in your ear! I like it, myself...

    Good luck!