I’m done with your lies,
And your games,
I’m breaking away,
I’m taking care of me,
I’m going to fix my life,
Do what I want to,
Not under your control,
You can’t bind me anymore,
I won’t let you hurt me,
You played with my heart,
And now I play with my knife,
Scheming a devious plan,
To take care of me,
Is that so wrong?
Don’t I deserve to be happy?
You made me suffer,
For far too long,
I could hurt you,
Lie to you,
Even kill you,
But I won’t,
Because I’m better than you,
I won’t sink to your level,
I am who I wanna be,
That’s how it’s going to stay,
No one will ever control me again,
Not the way you did,
I survived,
And I’m changing,
I won’t let anyone hurt me,
And I won’t hurt anyone else,
It’s my life,
My choice,
I would spite you,
But you’re not worth it,
See,
I found people that love me,
I mean really love me,
They accept me, for who I am,
They know I’m not perfect,
And they’re okay with that,
I have nothing to prove to you,
But everything to prove to them,
It’s okay that you’ll never understand how it feels to love,
I mean really feel it,
It’s sad,
And I pity you,
But I wanted to thank you,
Thank you for teaching me how to NOT treat people,
Thank you for making me aware of jerks like you,
Thank you for making me stronger,
Don’t get it wrong,
I still hate you,
But I don’t regret you,
And I’m moving on with my life,
Away from you,
On my own terms,
I just came back to say Good-Bye.
Author notes
I'm making a big change in my life, I am tired of letting people run all over me, its useless. I know who i am, and i know what i want, nothing or no one is going to change that.
I never really loved you anyway.
Comments
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wow
hun this is really good
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Well first of all:thanks for commenting so many of my poems!!
it was very surprising. this poem is all about who u are as a person and frm this poem i see that u are done with ppl **** with u! U write very well. oh i took this frm ur profile:To laugh is to risk appearing a fool,
To weep is to risk appearing sentimental
To reach out to another is to risk involvement,
To expose feelings is to risk exposing your true self
To place your ideas and dreams before a crowd is to risk their loss
To love is to risk not being loved in return,
To hope is to risk despair,
To try is to risk to failure.
did u write this?Really nice
Whats up with the bad comment beneth
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tl;dr never held more truth. This poem reads like a shopping list, "my life/my choice/spite/etc." For 58 lines, a poem had better be damn good, and this is not. In fact, this is probably the worst way to get over someone. It called his illiterate little being over to your allpoetry account like a moth to a flame. This poem is chock full of blind threats. You write a lot about surviving, almost like you are trying to convince yourself that you can.
This poem bored me. It is really no wonder that only "Jeremiah" and one of your little cronies commented -
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just shut the fuck up
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Oh dear, your lack of capitals and use of "the big f" have frightened me.
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And your point is?
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My point is, you do not intimidate me. Your poem still sucks.
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Hun, I hate to break it to you, but I never wanted to intimidate you, and yeah my poem may suck, but thats your opinion, let others have their own mind-unlike you-- you clearly don't have self-respect if you're constantly bringing other people down
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You are confusing "self-respect" for high self-esteem. No self-respect is what makes you spread your legs for everything that walks by. Besides, I obviously have sky-high self-esteem, otherwise I would attack those with flaws that I obviously do have. One cannot have their own mind, our minds are constantly influenced by our surroundings. If you are swearing at me and telling me to shut up, you are obviously trying to intimidate me.
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Um no, But whatever. I am who I am. I don't care what you or anyone says about me. Hate Me. Criticize me! whatever! i dont care
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You seem to think you know something that I do not.
Who said I hated you, Caitlin? You hate yourself too much for me to add to your unquenchable sorrow. -
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The point is I don't care if you hate me
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I do not care if you hate me either, Caitlin. And I cannot even see why you would.
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I didn't say I did. but you didn't exactly start out on a good foot
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Why are we having an "argument" of sorts about who hates whom, Caitlin, if neither of us hate each other?
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i dont know.. its a good question but if you are going to call me Katlyn at least spell it right
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Now, now, Caitlin. Just be happy that I call you by a name.
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I dont care if you ccall me a name.. call me whatever but at least do it right
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Here is what I read: "I do not care what you call me, so long as you call me what I have told you to call me."
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Like you really believe you can get away from me, i have always had a control over you, i always will, get used to it, no one loves you, you just want to believe that. sorry hunny but your not worth loving.....
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Screw you ass hole i love her so you can go kill yourself for all i care! fuck You! no one loves you because your a piece of shit And deserve To hit by a bus!
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Thanks... i know im not perfect.. but thanks for loving me... and im sorry for anything i ever did to hurt you... me lovers you so much....ya... hes not going to take that well
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