Don't judge me
By the color
Of my skin.
Don't judge me
When I make
A mistake.
Don't judge me
By my
Ethnicity.
Don't judge me
From the way
I talk.
Don't judge me
For how rich
Or poor I am.
Don't judge me
On how my
Parents act.
Don't judge me
Just take me
The way I am.
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Comments
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GO YOU! Rock on!!
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this was really really good.
it just said everything, not shrouded by metaphors and stuff. and i like it about that. i totally agree with you on everything and that people should not judge based on race, religion, people you hang out with, etc...
Great Write!
Mel
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Thank you for your entry
Unfortunately it does not fit with the criteria of the contest. Powerfull statements to be sure. Good flow and structure. Please, for future reference adhere to the criteria of the contest.
God Bless
Tammy -
wow this is great don,t judge me just take me the way i am good luck in the contest
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Excellent write! This is powerfully told and is honest, and raw.
Best of luck
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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A very well thought out and written poem. I like the repetition of the same words in the first line of each stanza. "Don't Judge Me"..a true fact that most people should practice everyday! Good luck in the contest
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