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Easter (Set of 3 Haiku)

Sacred "Eastre"
celebrated with Lord Jesus
Resurrected glory

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Modern Easter
Commercialized party
Material fun

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Easter blessings
Jesus pays for our sins
Divine promise

Author notes

In olden times Easter was spelled - Eastre... from old to new generation how Easter has changed yet its the same is the idea of the set of three Haiku.

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  • Arsenic-
    March 5, 2008

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    I had not seen that spelling before... interesting way you contrast the changes. Well, so long as we can celebrate His resurection, I'll take a little of the material as well. well done.


  • Candy6
    March 4, 2008
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    Wonderful inspirational haiku poems. Jesus loves us very and very much by going to the cross.


    • imperfectperfection
      March 4, 2008
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      Thanks Candy

      Thanks sweetie for your time... I'm glad you enjoyed reading... I appreciate your comment... thanks again for stopping by... take care Minoo

  • carole21
    March 4, 2008

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    very inspirational write for the prompt . . not a traditional format of 5/7/5 but very nice . . thanks for the contest entry


    • imperfectperfection
      March 4, 2008
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      Thanks Carole

      Oops sorry for the format - this is my first Haiku - I really appreciate your nice comment - inspires me to learn more about this form of poetry and try writing them.... thanks again for giving me a chance to explore this form of poetry... take care Minoo


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 4, 2008
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    never mind i am retarded


    • imperfectperfection
      March 4, 2008
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      hehehe - no you aren't retard... just too quick to jump the wagon to reading my poems - I was still changing a little (lol)


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 4, 2008

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    lol just wrote one a few days ago similar to this one Great write Sis good luck with it in the contest. ohow's this a haiku though


    • imperfectperfection
      March 4, 2008
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      Thanks babe

      I'm glad you liked it.. its my first haiku style poetry - one I'd tried to write before, I realized it wasn't haiku ... so I try yet again hopefully this time to actually writing a haiku - I appreciate your support & boost to my ego (lol) ... take care Minoo


  • Kelli Marie
    March 4, 2008

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    If this is a set of three haiku, then you should present them as three haiku. I like what they say. Very nice.
    Kelli


    • imperfectperfection
      March 4, 2008
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      Thanks Kelli

      I truly appreciate your time and guidance... Its my first haiku poetry. Do you mean I should include in Title - set of 3 haiku? I'm sorry it might sound dumb - I'm still learning .. Thanks again for your help.. take care Minoo

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