a slip of nature's child with
daffodil spray and tumbling
braids of sun drenched hair
the long curve secures her
slight semblance of a woman
Author notes
picture prompt (click to view)
http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2394/213.jpg?1204640805
"Love is metaphysical gravity." R. Buckminster Fuller
25 words
A contest entry
- PIF - Quickie by poetryality.
525 points, ended March 4, 2008, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love- Anything goes by Rachel21.
700 points, ended March 8, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Good times by Rashae.
525 points, ended March 14, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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THank you for entering!
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this was quite sure, but thank you for entering.
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Very nicely done. I love this piece of poetry. I think you did wonderfully. Good luck in the contest. A trophy contender for sure.
Kelli
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This is out of the box, and for sure unlike the rest. Rich with metaphors, and a different take entirely on the prompt painting. Love the first line! Thank you for this entry in my contest and I wish you the best!
Much Love & Many Blessings ♥
Renee
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Twenty-five well written words. Great depth for such a short write. Wishing you good luck in the contest. Good write.
Kelli
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