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Quick thinking

singular moment
a fleeting thought
fraction of time
when all is sought
mindset changes
it's ammunition
tumultuous thinking
mind in transition

A contest entry

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  • Rosalynd
    March 11, 2008
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    You know how I feel about meter and rhyme and this does them well. Well done my good man.


  • Grey Mouser
    March 8, 2008

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    Nicely written and with good meter and rhyme. Some changes be small, some large, it all depends on how we deal with them. Thanks for entering into the contest.
    Be well and be blessed,
    Mouser


  • ixtli
    March 4, 2008

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    I like the rhyme scheme. The last three lines are my favorite. This poem expresses a lot in few words. Nice job!