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Suicide Girl

You cannot look down on her,
All bubblegum and cotton candy,
She bounces through the high school halls,
A future of diamonds and furs,
The football hero arrives with red roses…
To round out the prom queen destiny ;

Who would ever thought she was so deep,
Little miss dumb blonde popularity,
Her special clique wore that stuck up chic…
With a modest dose of congeniality,
Straight A’s made the picture complete,
How she got them was a topic of mystery,
Either way she had the world at her feet ,
Who knew soft core cheerleaders could even think ;

Welcome to the party,
Daddy hired a killer band,
The apple of his eye…
In the palm of her hand,
Everybody hates her…
But the girl has got a plan,
She is going to show them all…
What they could never understand ;

Good girls wear pink…
And love a birthday cake
She looks so pretty,
Little suicide girl,
You want to slap her in the face,
You think the bitch is beyond fake,
What a beautiful waste,
Little suicide girl ;

When they opened up her diary,
The level of confusion was beyond belief,
She wrote about hidden pain in her dark poetry,
She hated what she had become…
And everything they had made her believe,
She thought the world was a haven for liars and thieves,
Everyone she knew was rotten to the core…
And dripping with sugar sweet deceit,
She painted on that smile like it was a disease,
Then she spread it all around…
Just to make them sick with envy,
It was all her private little joke…
And we were stunned to say the least,
When her suicide note said…
"I do not care if any of you ever miss me"!

You are all beneath me,
You were never worthy,
You are just the shallow fools who made me…
Be your princess prom queen ;

But she loved to wear pink…
And decorate a birthday cake,
She was so damn pretty…
Little suicide girl,
You want to slap that smile right off her face,
You thought that bitch was beyond fake,
What a beautiful waste,
Little suicide girl ;

You should scratch below the surface…
Of the monsters you create,
You should look at that perfect picture…
You will always find a few mistakes,
Anyone can smile through a devastating lie,
Like the water is always calmest…
Right before the levee breaks ;

Welcome to the party…
For our next queen of the world,
They always look so pretty…

Little suicide girl :

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Option 4: Pen me something about social structures: populars, nerds, bullys ect.

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  • XXMetalHeadNoni13Xx
    December 31, 2008
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    i loved it so much i bookmarked it and reread it all the time.


    • Redrusty66
      January 7
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      Thanks so much , what a nice honor. Always thrills me when another artist finds merit and value in a piece of work. Thanks so much for the words.


  • SarahEatsAirplane
    April 5, 2008

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    This DOES have great ideas in it. I like how straightforward you put it, and how you proved that everything goes under the skin too.

    good luck.


  • liduen silver member
    March 16, 2008

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    WOW!!! This is really good. I like the ideas in it. it also flows very well. The repetition factor is nice. Great write and good luck in the contest


    • Redrusty66
      March 16, 2008
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      Thannks so much for your time, always a joy to recieve feedback.

  • U.g.l.y.
    March 4, 2008
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    To the core. No more words.

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