Drugged senses
Your presence storms me
Into blessings of starchildren
Joyful feelings
For nonexistent masterpiece
Author notes
"I love you" <- Used as a prompt. And yes, I love someone who doesn't exist, or I love nobody. Take it as you wish.
A contest entry
- Love PIF Quickie with a catch... by sunflowerpoet.
300 points, ended March 6, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ANYTHING SHORT by Blooming Poet.
400 points, ended March 7, 2008, 105 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love's Many Faces by Silly Rabbit..
600 points, ended May 22, 2008, 56 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Short but true in many senses. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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Unreal feelings going on in here. Your talent appears to lie in this short poems, so well done one of the best set of short poems I have ever read. Beautiful...good words too
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Great twist on the prompt...I like it. Good luck
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Ooh, I loved the theme here. Loving the person of your dreams even before you spot him/her is something original... I loved the wording here, especially "blessings of starchildren." You have maintained the word count, and haven't used the word "Love". Thanks for entering, and good luck in the judging...
Sunflower.
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