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Dream's End

Smiling and laughing at you at the door
Twirling and singing when around me is bodies galore
Precious friends
Was I not one? Hah!
Foolish love

You hate me You hate me
What will you do?

I hate you I hate you
You made me cry
In a dream In a dream
Was you and me

In a dream In a dream
You laughed with me
Singing of love and foolish hopes
Meadows and shakes
Kisses I dreamed
Forever Forever Together Forever
I believed you but you left me behind

Protect me! Saved me!
Are you a fool?
It was not my life you treasured
It was my heart you broke

Why do I hate a love that led to hate?
Why do you hate a hate of love?
I hate you! You scum!
Yet...
Why do I still care for your dead corpse?

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  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    March 4, 2008

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    wow this is very deep,
    very powerful, i love the scheme,
    i love the theme and feel,
    i love the poem,
    best of luck in the contest,
    love Elektra,
    *leaves a rose*