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Lean On Me

When you need someone,
you can lean on me.
I'll be here for you,
forever and beyond.
As long as I'm breathing,
I'll be there for you.
Don't worry my darling.
I will wipe your tears,
make you smile,
even give you my shoulder.
You can always count on me,
for I will always be there.

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Inspired by the song Lean On Me by: Kirk Franklin

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  • Melissa Burns
    March 6, 2008

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    Thank you for entering my humble little contest. I am having fun exsposing myself to something different. Good luck


  • Zenda-Lokki silver member
    March 6, 2008

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    You made me smile reading this so the person it was meant for I'm sure would have been given great comfort from it. You have a great way of expressing emotion x


  • TheClimb
    March 4, 2008

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    Song inspired poem...interesting!!!!

    Your words my dear darling I take 'n return back to you without changing a thing except that they now come from the depths of my heart to yours. I promise this in love always 'n forever my dear and sweet sister!!!!


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 4, 2008

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    this is so beautifully inspired you have penned such detail and emotions in your words. beautiful well done


  • Lady Australis silver member
    March 4, 2008
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    beautiful sister
    i love you

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