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Blossoms in the Clouds

I see her face in every creamy carved creation

adrift as gossamer puffs on an endless azure sea.

My heart soars with eagle's flight

each moment live in thought

of the lingering traces from her kisses

pressed so permanently upon my soul.

 

Oh how the petals of our love

have flowered in airy ecstasy

while we ride the current of desire's breath

unto that lover's Eden found starry gaze

sown from our seeds of passion

that angels guard with sacred wings.

 

Though night travail in our longing

because time has brought a fleeting canyon

as momentary rift in our embrace,

our hearts will reach forever

beyond its second's gap in intimacy

until again we hold the sun in our touch

and taste a dawn where no shadow darkens

the hearth of our oneness

 shall ever dwell.

 

Until then, the Venus of my universe

will grace my day in goddess vision within my head,

one I'll find in each blossom in the clouds,

knowing it is where our spirits were written

upon a destined scroll of eternal ink.

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  • NeonRose
    April 5, 2008
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    Just reiterating my previous comment, and congratulations on winning the silver.


  • ukelova
    March 26, 2008
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    nice

    Well done.

    Goood luck in the contest,
    BJ.


  • NeonRose
    March 25, 2008
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    This was quite lovely. I really like the ending lines. Good luck in the contest.


  • Dalaney gold member
    March 21, 2008
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    i'm satisfied.
    this is a damn good poem.
    Love, Lane


  • Lonely
    March 17, 2008

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    This is a beautifully written love poem.. the feelings are expressed so well.. the rhythm and flow of the poem was great too.. I enjoyed the read.. Keep writing and good luck with the contest

    ~ Lonely


  • going nowhere
    March 4, 2008

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    i love these kind of yuck poems... to have a guy actaully think that is like... love. wouldn't that be nice? wonderful poem.


  • Desire gold member
    March 4, 2008

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    Oh My!!

    Now I will say this is Yuck ONLY if You feel it is
    but You know deep down inside I will rub my chin and go Orllllllllllllly
    Love the gossamer puffs
    Keep that quill dancing on destined scrolls
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweetness
    Best wishes too
    and my Love~ Desire~*~


  • Tender Expressions
    March 4, 2008

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    Such endearing words of love you have penned. I must say that I had become lost among them for a spell and that journey was grand. Well done! Keep up the great work!


    ~TE~


  • Nature Song silver member
    March 4, 2008

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    Knowing it is where our spirits were written upon that scroll. Lovely poem my friend. For love was in the air with this one for sure! ~Sie


  • tara wilson gold member
    March 4, 2008

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    Well, I like yucky, mushy love poems, they are my favorite!lol...and this one is very well done...

    "while we ride the current of desire's breath

    unto that lover's Eden found starry gaze

    sown from our seeds of passion

    that angels guard with sacred wings."> I love that...

    This is beautiful....what a beautiful title too,
    excellent and creative...wispy...love this
    Good luck in the contest..



  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 4, 2008

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    Yuck poems what is that supposed to mean mushy gushy love poems lol. You did well with this has feeling and is very well written Good luck with it


  • Lady Australis silver member
    March 4, 2008
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    wow grandfather
    amazeing , stunning
    i love you

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