When you make me sad
I want to talk about it.
But that makes you sad
which it should.
And that makes me sad,
the look on your face,
as my tears make you sad.
What is a girl to do?
Because it makes me sad
all this to do
and then that makes you sad.
Its all very counter productive
in this, our industry of love.
Author notes
So what do you get when you combine the monotony of an economics office job with trying to be efficient in love?
A repeditive (like filing) poem.
Not trying to be sad, I just find the circles amusing, and the equation, industry plus love, but I also think it is a very sweet deleima to be in.
A contest entry
- Love, Love, Love. No PW by LanguishedLad.
700 points, ended March 17, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Like repeditive I know. Your take?
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i have found myself in a similar situation. where you're sad and then the other person is sad because you're sad and then everyone is sad which is very depressing!
This poem made my head spin a little (good thing)
great poem
♥Nakatréa
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Oh dear...this poem may belay even a deeper meaning...is the person you adore forced to work and ignore...
you?
What a horrible situation! Oh, what a person you are, to be able to find it amusing!
I quite admire you...I guess the anarchist in me would cause me to do something rash such as douse my affection's boss in gasoline or something.
~Hippie
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thanks
Thankyou for the entry and best of luck in the contest -
wow, shows a very good point, i really liked it. keep on writing.
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Oh your too sweet for my own good, I really hate this poems form personally. But I needed to get the idea down so what was I to do?
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it really is good. i see all ur points and they are shown clearly. its great.
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