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I Am From

I am from love and hurt
I wonder why do love hurt so bad
I hear loud sound of my pain in my heart
I see my heart in my hand knife through it
I want the pain to stop
I am from love and hurt

I pretend to be happy when i am hurtting
I feel my heart getting weak
I touch my breaken heart
I worry how i am gonna get throw this
I cry out all my pain
I am from love and hurt

I understand that love is a game of war
I say love hurt
I dream Of being in a place where i cant get hurt by love
I try to be happy with you
I hope we can be in love again
I am from love and hurt

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  • brigit
    June 15, 2008

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    this was very touching.. I think I have seen the "I AM" as a prompt before but I like what you have done here!


  • UncleSpace
    April 11, 2008
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    Very moving...

    This is very moving Queen, it made me cry. You hang in there, I hope you are well. Be your best friend, keep loving yourself, you are a great person, I can tell, believe it. Please keep writing and always go back to it, you'll just get better and better!

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