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Darkness

Deathly is the moon high in the sky
Shining down on it's dreading victims

Dreading it's arrival in the night

With the moon arrives a creature of a diffrent kind

New emotions and fears never felt before

A new danger is born with each of it's risings

Here comes night

Here comes darkness

I'm not sure if this is good it just popped out of my head.

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  • esimbf
    March 4, 2008
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    Sure sure what ever you say let say I leave what it is about to the imagenation of the reader. Your a reader Erin so you can think it is about anything your little heart disiers. This is me officaly giving up I am done with arguing with you it is immposible to win.

  • Afs
    March 3, 2008
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    It's really good. And no matter what you say I think it's about werewolves