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Your eyes say it all

My hearts reaches out
To you and only you
For you in this world
There's nothing I wouldn't do

Just to feel your love
Enveloping me entirely
Or maybe that coy look
Smiling at me shyly

The taste upon your lips
Your body against mine
The feel of your skin
Forever lost in time

My happily ever after
My dream finally true
Walking down the aisle
Faithfully for only you

But the one thing that tells our story
The one that caused my fall
Your love shown to me best
You eyes say it all

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  • Deceits Tears silver member
    March 4, 2008
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    Loved this to bits, all the best in the contest

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    March 3, 2008
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    Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck, Josie

  • Aisades
    March 3, 2008

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    beautiful

    You know how to write for contests really well.

    Nice work, very good flow.