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confusion

i think i love you
but in still not sure
please say you love me too
beacause it sounds so sweet
comming from you

you want to be with me
but you wont even try
you make it hard for me to see
anything but confusion
please set my heart free

i want to be your wife
through sickness and in health
i want you in my life
till death do us part
will i be your wife?

i offer you my heart
so please dont break it
ive loved you from the start
and youve always known your in my heart

so im walking away
i hope you will follow
and tell me to stay
but just in case you dont
this will be my last day....

of confusion....

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  • Blooming Poet
    March 3, 2008

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    This is a very confusing situation indeed, but at your age don't jump to fastt. Check for spelling errors and i=I, otherwise great poem. comming=coming