Trapped
Forever
In
The
Darkness
All
Alone
Shunned
by
Society
Lost
and
Lonely
Author notes
10 poets
13 words
Prompt ~ I am forgotten
A contest entry
- 10 ~ 13 by Lavender Butterfly.
390 points, ended March 3, 2008, 8 entries
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Comments
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Society's stereotypes are harsh against the skin and can leave scars, both internal and external. Thank you for proving this point in such a sad, twisted, and truthful way.
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i officially unshun you from society. welcome back. :-) very powerful piece in such few words. so very well done.
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So sad and creatively engaging... Thanks ever so much for sharing this and many blessings to you... x Lavender Butterfly.



