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Tide


The tide had fallen. Again
we had seen the sun die, and
when the stars rose,
our footprints had been washed away.

And we had seen the sun die
again. The tide had fallen.
Had our footprints been washed away
when the stars rose?




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repeton couplet- line one and line three in reverse order in a pair of successive lines

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  • rinzurajan
    November 1

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    thats an interesting form...never heard of it...thanks and good luck


  • Kelli Marie
    March 4, 2008

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    I have never heard of the repeton couplet before this one. A very nice form. Thank you for sharing this form with me.
    Kelli