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I ask you:

Tell me, if I wrote you a love song.
Will that lock our love to be life long?
If I ripped open my chest and gave you my heart
Would you love it then rip it apart?

If I got on my knees and begged to you
"Darling Darling let's start a new"
Would you let us, or would you whither?
Till there's no love but we're just bitter?

How do I ask a simple question about what your feeling
When baby you got my head going through hoops and reeling
So if I can't write you a love song.
Would you leave me and take a flight as far as Honk-Kong?

So I ask of you..

Do you still love me baby.

Like I love you?


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  • Nitenovanavium
    March 5, 2008
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    lol, this is beautiful hun.
    I missed your work so much! it's amazing...
    I don't know who this poem is about, but they must be the luckyest guy on the planet. And he'd be an idiot to let you down.

    marvellous, you've gotten alot better lately. And im not just saying that. You've grown into a beautiful young writer, and a beautiful young lady.