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Pain, Fading, Darkness

I look up at him
His body heaving up and down
I shut my eyes tight
Waiting for the next pound
The thrash of his hard, cold hand against me
Against my tender face
The face exposed to so much pain
More pain then anyone should recieve
I try and crawl away
His foot comes down on my chest
Can't move
Can't breath
Cant't see
My vision becoming blurry
I can barely hear his words
His face comes close to mine
"Useless"
His voice whispers
His lips are now on mine
Forcing me to kiss his crude, cold lips
The taste of his spit
Cherries mixed with hard whisky
His hands now reaching down
No, not this
Effortlessly, his fingers unbutton me
I push as hard as I can
"Wanna play dirty? Fine"
Pain
Fading
Darness

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painful surrender

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  • Lost In Dreaming
    March 15, 2008

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    wow--this was deffinately a painful read though i love the raw emotion, amazing write

    ♥ meg

  • DarkRomantic113
    March 5, 2008
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    Way to capture the moment.


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    March 4, 2008

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    wow this one bought back memories,
    i think anyman who can preform rape and abuse is a man worth death,
    just know that im always here for you,
    i love the poem its so powerful,
    good luck in the contest,
    xxx Elektra xxx