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Spring Love


Spring is in the air
And my heart begins to stir
Life is all around us
Here the singing of the birds
Fragrance in the breeze
Tantalizes my mind
As you walk towards me
Your the love of my life
Like a breath of fresh air
A smile that shines so bright
Your long flowing hair
Fills my heart with delight
I hold you in my arms
And give you a sweet kiss
As we walk away hand in hand
We are taken by this bliss



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  • NeonRose
    March 25, 2008
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    A lovely write, I enjoyed reading it very much. Good luck in the contest.

  • Amarige
    March 4, 2008

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    Romantic poem of love..wonderful emotions flowing through your words..best of luck
    amarige


  • Solo Wisp gold member
    March 4, 2008
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    Beautiful entwining of rhythmic imagery.

    Good luck to you in the contest!


  • penman gold member
    March 3, 2008

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    Wonderful

    Very well done. A great expression of love and all the power of romance. best of luck in the contest.