Im really sorry for what I did
I hope you’d listen and just forgive
All I could do is explain what I did wrong
I wish I could tell you that we do belong
But that wont do any good, I know cause I’ve tried
How I wish I never lied
But I cant take back the past, I wish that I could
I wish we can redo this whole night and I think that we should
But I am really sorry I never meant to hurt you
But I’d do anything to get back in your life
My sorry is all I have to say
Nothing else will turn your head my way
Baby, please read my letter
Really I will try to do better
I cannot believe that you are gone
I shouldn’t have played you like a pawn
I swear my lies are done with and finished
Please believe me dearest, cause I slowly diminish
My love, I never thought I’d say that word
But when you left I realized your worth
So please come back once you read my confession
Cause I’m slowly going into depression
That’s all I have to say and I hope it’s enough
All I want is you to come back ‘cause you’re my one true love.
Author notes
one of the first poems i've ever written.
WAY before i joined ap 
written some time in early 2006.
In a list
A contest entry
- Regretful Disgrace by Silly Rabbit..
1900 points, ended August 2, 2008, 26 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Apologies by catalyst..
450 points, ended October 6, 2008, 27 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I like the last too lines. They summed up the poem very well.
I cannot believe that you are gone
I shouldn’t have played you like a pawn
I liked those lines. The rhyme was so smooth there and not forced at all.
I think there may have been a line left out in the middle
But I am really sorry I never meant to hurt you
But I’d do anything to get back in your life
Though I kind of like it. It makes those lines stick out, and they represent the message of the poem wonderfully. Great Write. -
I love this! It is really good. Good luck in the contest!
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ehee thanksss
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Beautiful penned... This is exactly what I was looking for in this contest...
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thankyou
goodluck with the contest!
xx.
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awwww
so sweet.
lol i like this because its you apologizing
instead of getting mad at someone for hurting you.
no offense, i like your newer stuff better.
its more emotional
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