To say the words without the feeling.
Is to avoid the heartfelt meaning.
So I won't do that.
Happy birthday,
I love you.
A contest entry
- Birthday Wishes by Michael-B.
550 points, ended March 5, 2008, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Get The Gold for a pre-write by piccola.
300 points, ended June 3, 2008, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Happy Bday Too..... by SomeonesToySoldier.
525 points, ended September 10, 2008, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Silver to Gold by Age of Rain.
360 points, ended September 27, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Short Poems' Wanted!! by SignifyingNothing.
450 points, ended October 19, 2008, 123 entries
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777 points, ended January 9, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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short sweet and to the point.
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This is very sweet, a nice birthday poem. Who wouldn't want to recieve a poem like this from a loved one? Thank you for sharing it. Congratulations on the silver trophy- this was a wonderful birthday poem, and it was well-deserved.
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Thank you for this entry. Its short simple sweet and gets the point across. I usually tend to shy away from short poetry but I did rather enjoy this one.
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Nice job...lots of meaning in these few words
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Meaningful, delightful
Celadia this says a universe full to someone on day that many just pass up, because to them it is another on the calendar. But to have some say 'I love you' on their birthday, is to receive the grandest gift of all. Thank you for sharing this very short, but very sweet poem.
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short sweet
good job
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Oh I love this! It is so special. I only wish I would hear those words when it comes along to be my birthday. Blessed Be! ~~Shannon~~
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happy birthaday from me as well,,,peter well done on silver
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Gee Celadia..this is a beautiful work! Congratulations on the silver trophy! THANKS for writing this one!
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Very nice poem good message with alot of meaning, says alot in very few words. thanx for entereing,
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Nice, very creative...nice imagery....
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