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White Petals

One petal,
Two Petal,
Pick Pick Pick,
He loves me,
He loves me not,
And then theres her,
She's his drug,
He's mine,
And everything seems fine.
Until I'm addicted again.
Until I see him again.
Until I hear is voice again.
Unitl...
Pick,
Pick,
Pick,
He loves me.

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  • ShaylaSevenfold
    June 19, 2008

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    I like it ^__^
    It's got the whol love triangle thing going for it
    I love him, but he loves her....


  • Whispered Secrets
    May 5, 2008

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    I liked this but it could've been a bit more descriptive. it seemed like the poem was unfinished.

    Still; it's very good.


  • Candy6
    March 19, 2008
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    I like this poem. Good job!