Sensless oousing,
Faint, heart attack.
Inspiration lacking,
Too layed back.
Puzzling taking time,
Thoughful thinking flourished.
Mask make-up disappearing,
Normal, too ashamed!
Dropping at the words,
Feelng upside down.
Finally figuring out,
It all comes back around.
A contest entry
- HELP! HELP! I CAN'T DO IT ALONE! by Tempa Lee.
300 points, ended March 6, 2008, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give me Everything you've Got by CrystalJet.
600 points, ended March 14, 2008, 318 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Why oh why
Comments
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hey this is Dani the judge....i meant to tell people that i will be a little harsh or close to mean if i don't like what i read. nice and short and very good write for your age. i liked it. even though it could have been a little longer (to me) and a little darker...you did a great job. good luck.
~Dani~
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