My words just don't come out,
Even though I love you so.
Just two lost souls intertwined,
Sick of all the come and go.
Your bad moods drive me crazy,
Even though I love you so.
I'm sorry we lost the baby,
One of the hardest things I let go.
You make me sad when your depressed,
But still I love you so.
I hate it when you say your cutting,
The distance means I never know.
I hate your family as you do,
Though I love you so.
They try and try to break us up,
Easiest thing to let go.
I'm sorry that we fight alot,
I wanna say I love you so.
I'm sorry I hung up alot!
But I wanna turn away and go.
I guess I wanna stay together,
It's not that funny I love you so much.
Spend the day and night together,
I'll never miss your touch!!
A contest entry
- ~_Forever&Always_~ by scream.n2.nite.
445 points, ended March 16, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - long lost first love back by Pureisolation.
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Explaing my life
Comments
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see it through
Thank you for this write!! The content is REAL and effective. True love is meant to outlast all our faults and plunders, and together two hearts keep each other strong. I liked the rhyming and the repetition throughout the stanzas. Thank you!! ^_^
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