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Allergic Reaction

Your denseness nauseates me
To no end
When your around my body cringes
At the sight of you
Your arrogance drives me
To hate you more
You're as shallow as a puddle
I wish the sun would come up
You annoy me like a mosquito
I need some bug spray.

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Written November 29th, 2003

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  • SafeHaven
    December 11, 2003
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    grrrrrrreat! (like tony the tiger!)

    heh...I ALWAYS need some bug spray...: /

  • gstaciec
    November 29, 2003
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    nice jobb keep it up