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Confidence

Walking like a one man army
staying strong all along the way
to the gall
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Author notes

15 words of confidence umm "walking like a one man army" is from the john mayer song "say" I did not make it up but its cool. hope you like it!

Nakatréa

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  • Valley Girl silver member
    May 20, 2008
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    Wow! This is definetly a great piece showing confidence. Very strong.


  • PoetBoy2008
    March 3, 2008

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    yeah i noticed that verse you mentioned from john Mayers song i love that song. this is a very good short poem too.


  • crazymomma
    March 3, 2008

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    Nice

    I really like the way you spelled gall
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    like the gallows are falling. That's cool!


  • BeautifullyBroken42
    March 3, 2008
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    yay i love it!!!!! cool!!!!! i loved it!!!!! hehe good luck!!