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Frozen

This bittersweet insanity
Taking over me.
This world so wrong,
And life so long.
My heart does ache
And these smiles I fake.
My crimson lips hold
All these lies I've told.
Oh, you'll never know..
How badly I wish to let go...

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  • love or life
    August 30, 2008

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    short but sweet.

    A very powerful verse. You had me from the first line. well done, beautifully written - I like your style.