Alone

Alone is staring at the sky
watching the stars brighten by hour
Alone is when I think of you
when I begin to cry
Alone is where I belong
where I know my powers
Alone is when I fall asleep
when I dream of you
Alone is when I scream
and yet no one hears me
Alone is when I know me best
and no one else does
Alone is when I'm craving for comfort
when you don't give it to me

Alone is how I'll always be...

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Dont Lose THE ONE
March 3, 2008

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B-E-A-U-TIFUL!!!!! =]
OMG. This poem is amazing. Like depth and all. It has emotion to it. Beyond belief emotoin. The music just added more to it! That was a great choice of music. I love the depth in it. It repeats the word Alone. And then it builds up the tension. Amazing job with that one. The whole poem was just an insperation. I love it. The punch like of "Alond is how I'll always be..." It's so sad and such a good line! My favorite lines would have to be the 4 where it says "Alone is when i fall asleep// when I dream of you." and..... "Alone is when I'm craving for comfort// when you don't give it to me" Those are some powerful words. Great Job! I so hope you wrote more poems cuz this on is beyond great. It's so great it made me cry ='[ expectually with the music. It was just heart touching. Great Job!