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In Your Arms

I inhale, capturing everything

that slips out, seeking rapt pleasure

from the essence that is you

 

“your breath is sweet to the taste”

 

pulsing excitement is waiting

to be felt, and I consume it

with tender resolve

 

ever to be savored by

this heart’s needful hunger,

uncommon and certainly insatiable

 

“your sigh is like music to my ears”

 

scents mingle, saturating every inch

of the room, thick and sultry

as a mid summer day

 

holding our souls captive

within the bonds of

fervent ardor bathed

 

“with the perfume of passion”  

 

languid sensuality pleads

this moment be frozen

for eternity and

 

we become intoxicated with

the aroma of our intimate

pheromone union, and after

 

“we sleep the sleep of love.”

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  • Beyond Broken
    August 6

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    that was an incredible write. I love it. it was very tasteful too. great work and thank you for entering.

  • MoonsShadow gold member
    July 18

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    signs of true love

    life is full of hope,desires,insights and most of all heartfelt assurances. thank you for this lovely entry, good luck
    Lin

  • -------dirty happy thoughts

  • sweet readers will be able to feel what your writing this is sweet


  • Angelflower Greeters member
    April 2

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    Oh.. wow.. This was really good. I can't think of anything else to say!! And thats hard to do.. I really enjoyed this a lot.. Such a great write from someone who has a gift with words..
    great write.
    Peace to you, Jetleena

  • azlyn gold member
    March 28

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    "we sleep the sleep of love" Ahhh...the best sleep of all!

    Thanks for the entry...best of luck!

    Az

  • ardentMarch gold member
    March 13

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    lol..I agree with Lane...your sensual writes are so beautiful, move over to the others!! lol

    I love these lines:
    "[“your sigh is like music to my ears”


    scents mingle, saturating every inch

    of the room, thick and sultry

    as a mid summer day]"

    and
    "[“we sleep the sleep of love.”]"..what a beautiful way to end this...

    I love all the lines in italics, especially...because they feel like they are being whispered in my ear..this is a very lovely & sensual poem, thanks so much for entering the contest..




  • Lady in Love
    March 6

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    The sigh of love. The truest essence of one's being in true love with another is awesome, mere words cannot express how we can truly feel. But I feel you expressed it well here.

    Thank you MJ for sharing this wonderful poem.

    Tish


  • Sylvyrwyng silver member
    March 5
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    Yummmmmmmm!!!!! Your wife is one lucky woman! Beautiful and simple. Wonderful work hon...

  • LOL. I agree with ashjoe...

    I'd love to get there someday!
    A gorgeous, rapturing write! You completely captivated me and kept my attention to the end... even quickened my pulse a bit!
    Lovely. I adore how you can write erotica that seems sensitive... loving and love-making! The best of both worlds, LOL!
    Great job, brother!


  • Amarige
    March 4

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    Wow Michael..your words are beautiful my friend..so much love and passion coming through..wonderful job
    Amarige

  • how lucky she is to be loved like that! There is hope for us all. J

  • ashjoe76
    March 4

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    Excellent

    The sleep of Love? - would love to get there one day... you have done a wonderful job, MJ. Congrats!


  • mzmikki silver member
    March 4
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    I love this!! You did an excellent job!!

  • Very sensual.

    This is very sensual and it is a treat for the romantics in us all. You did a splendid job.


  • Dalaney gold member
    March 3

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    I think there are a few poets here who better move over in the romance department and give this man some room! lol Wow. Love, Lane

  • Oh, to be loved like that...

    The title of the contest says it all until I read your words.




  • Lost for words!!... this is divine!! Oh my... such ardent and passionate love in this.
    Absolutely beautiful MJ... I'm bookmarking this... this is so sensual found myself getting all flushed!!
    I agree.. oh to be loved like that! *big sigh*


  • Moqui Takoda
    March 3

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    This is lovely, and the format is nice and tight. You write with a sureness that is happily spread upon the sheet of paper. The images you have are images of fragrance, and texture ... these continue to become more intense and sensual ... yet remaining tender and respectful. Your final lines show that even the intense joy and pleasure of union are followed by the same only on a level of loving just simply to be with the one you love .... this is a way to be loved the way you wish to be loved, by loving in that way. This is very fine.

    Thank you for your beautiful poem in this contest.

    peace ,,,Moqui
  • oh daddy this is such a beautiufl write the love that melts between your words is beautiful and made me sigh.it is so strong and heartfelt. well done daddy I love you

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